Context:
June 19th, 2017, a van was driven into pedestrians in Finsbury Park, London, injuring at least eight people. This occurred near the Muslim Welfare House, 100 yards (90 m) from Finsbury Park Mosque. This was seen as a terrorist attack. Darren Osbourne was charged with terrorist-related murder and attempted murder.
Content:
Within the article it says that Darren Osbourne was actually aiming to kill Jeremy Corbyn since he was meant to be in a march that he ended up not attending, Osbourne also claimed he wasn't the one driving the van and it was actually someone he met in a pub a year back whose been named as 'Dave' but later on in the article it states that Osbourne said he was the only one in the van meaning he was the driver, he was also under the influence of "a couple pints" as he puts it.
Opinion:
I think that he was acting alone and most likely partially drunk and now he's realized that this is a serious crime and doesn't want to go to prison so he's trying to find an excuse in order to stop the jury from finding him guilty however I think its unlikely the jurors will plead not guilty.
Dante, If you are going to use the CCCEO structure it should be embedded within the writing not as headings for a report and you should use all of them.
ReplyDeleteWhat you also need to consider is what REPRESENTATION is being discussed and how its being discussed in the article.