Wednesday, 8 November 2017

weekly news



Mark van Dongen was murdered by his jealous ex via acid attack however his ex Berlinah wallace denies all charges and says that he put the acid in the glass of water and encouraged her to drink it. Bristol crown court heard that Mark went to a euthanasia clinic since the pain was so unbearable, he took his own life.
The jury heard that Ms Wallace was looking online at purchasing the sulfuric acid as well as searching if she can die by drinking acid and into acid attacks. If this is true this is a clear indication that she did indeed murder him since no one looks into the effects of acid attacks without reason to.
In my honest opinion i think she did it since jealousy is a very powerful emotion leading people to do stupid things i.e. murdering an ex. Her trial continues this thursday

1 comment:

  1. You need to use the CCCEO formula clearly you have not attempted this here. Please state what the source is, who wrote the article as this could have some bearing on their opinion. There has been a recent spate of acid attacks, do they follow a similar pattern of jealousy? Where are people buying the acid? Should there be legislation against the purchase of Acid? How responsible is the medias reporting of the issue? If they did not disclose the source of the purchase of Acid would there be less attacks?

    These are examples of lines of investigation you should be going down in order to access higher grades, please re submit the weekly news posting.

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